My first crush (Shory story)

8th September 1990

We were returning from school. Sangeetha and Divya were very happy today as they got good marks in History paper. I was not that happy with my marks. Though it doesn’t matter to me, I was sure my mother would create a scene when I show her my red inked answer sheet. Inspite of my upcoming problems, my eyes were searching for him all around πŸ‘€.

Usually I see him waiting for the bus. If not there, he used to be in Raghu Uncle’s Book stall. Today since he was not in the bus stop, I decided to enter the book stall. I checked my pockets. Yes, I had some money in it. So I thought I would buy a note book. After all, there should be some reason to enter the book stall. Also I was sure that the notebook would not go waste as my mother would make me repeat the whole answers again and again once I show her my answer sheet.

I asked Raghu Uncle for the notebook. As he went to take it from the shelf, my eyes rolled around the whole stall. But he was not there 😦. I was heart brokenπŸ’”.

As I turned back to leave the place, he appeared there from nowhere. All of a sudden, he was standing just in front of me. I did not know what to do and how to react 😲.

Β But he smiled at me and said “hello” 😍😍😍😍. It made my day. My joy knew no bounds………😊😊😊😊

That brought a smile on her face when she read her diary today after long 27 years. And she spoke to herself………… “MY FIRST CRUSH”.



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  1. Wow. Lovely short story. ☺

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thank you 😊

  2. TechFlax says:

    Lovely sweet story

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

  3. […] My first crush (Shory story) […]

  4. Nisha Sharma says:

    That’s really sweet.. Amazing work!
    Good wishes πŸ™‚

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thanks a lot Nisha 😊

  5. ravisidula says:

    Good one. The notebook love story πŸ™‚

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thank you πŸ™πŸ˜›

  6. nice one….. sweet one…..

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thank you so much

  7. That’s a nice one. And beautifully penned too!

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thanks a lot sreedeep 😊

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thank you 😊😊

  8. Wow. That’s lovely.

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thank you mubdiul .. 😊

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      Thanks 😊😊

      1. RPR says:

        Welcome… Do post ur view On my posts

        1. Maya Bhat says:

          Sure.. will do 😊

          1. RPR says:

            #many thanks

  9. Sreeblogs says:

    Wow such a sweet story πŸ™‚

    1. Maya Bhat says:

      😊😊 everyone may had crushes once upon a time πŸ˜‚

      1. Sreeblogs says:

        Yup that’s for sureπŸ˜‚

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